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Fully colored animatic from a scene I animated in Flash for my Intermediate 2D Animation course. Full animation coming later this month! This needs in-betweens and more details on the background, which will be added soon. The animation will be finished Tuesday, color may take a little longer.


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5tevenM Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014
those fangs D:

just wondering, what are their names
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Zipper-1 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Professional Filmographer
Oh, that's Zipper on the left and Trigger is the one with Zipper's brain in his hand.
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5tevenM Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014
so he got the brain out through the zipper? :paranoid:
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Zipper-1 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Professional Filmographer
The zipper on Zipper's back, yes.
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5tevenM Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014
:D
poor zipper
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Zipper-1 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Professional Filmographer
He'll be okay. He can't die because of his curse.
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5tevenM Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014
Then time to... test the curse to the limit :paranoid:
cut every limb! take all organs [if any others]!!!
:D 
and see if he likes it
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Zipper-1 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Professional Filmographer
Yeah, he's got all the organs but he can stuff them back in and sew himself back together. As far as liking it, I'm sure he wouldn't.
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SEODrawsCartoons Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Student Digital Artist
This is cool! :D
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Zipper-1 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Professional Filmographer
Thank you so much!
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Animatedfocks Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Student Filmographer
Since this requested critique and my critiques aren't 100 words here it is:

My only critique is the character on the left.  The Pink lineart is really harsh against the eye. It's really hard to find the details through it.  I would make it a bit darker, like the one on the right.  Which The one on the right is pretty osm.

That's it.  Keep up the god work.
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Zipper-1 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013  Professional Filmographer
Really? Hmm, Schwab liked the colors for him, it was actually the character on the right that he didn't like the colored lineart before but that's what made me change it to better match. I've actually heard that pink and black go together well. It's a high contrast look, but I definitely like it. If I make it any darker, it will blend in with the red. Thank you! I really appreciate it! 
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Animatedfocks Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013  Student Filmographer
Don't change it towards red, change it to a greyer Pink then.  It's a suggestion, you don't have to do it, haha.
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Zipper-1 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Professional Filmographer
Well, I'll try it in Photoshop but I can't promise I'm going to keep it. :shrug: I know but I at least try to make changes that are suggested unless they're totally nitpicky.
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Animatedfocks Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Student Filmographer
Fair enough, haha.
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Zipper-1 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Professional Filmographer
=P
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Chilry Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Student Artist
Woow! Funny animation :D
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Zipper-1 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Professional Filmographer
Thank you! I'm glad you like it! It's far from being finished but I figured it would be fun to give everyone a sneak peek of what was in store.
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Chilry Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2013  Student Artist
I think so and you are welcome. ^^
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Zipper-1 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2013  Professional Filmographer
I have a lot more now and some scenes where the animation is finished.
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Quaxiji Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Student Digital Artist
hahahahahahahahaha, can you animate my ocs? Just asking :)
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Zipper-1 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Professional Filmographer
Thank you! Well, if you can hold out until after March, I could definitely give it a whirl! Right now I'm booked, though. I have a million things to do and only six months until I graduate college. 
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Quaxiji Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013  Student Digital Artist
ok, i understand
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